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The rhyme surprised me and then I was surprised how much I liked it! I think it’s hard to use rhyme effectively. 😊

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I’m very impressed with how you use rhyme in this poem to intensify the strength of the sentiments.

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What a beautiful gift and the picture is lovely too!

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Sep 25, 2023·edited Sep 25, 2023Liked by Juliet Robertson

That is beautiful Juliet, you will remain an inspiration to me as well, forever and always x

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Sep 25, 2023Liked by Juliet Robertson

Sending love to you both x

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